First Beat sheet w notes
Concept Statement:
Sometimes love is right under your “super” mask.
6-sentence story:
1. Maximo wants to …
2. He wishes for …
3. The next morning …
4. After…
5. Maximo realizes …
6. Maximo and Silver…
Beat Sheet
Act 1- ALONE: EXTERIOR – CITYSCAPE -- ROOFTOPS
· Maximo (in super suit) on a skyscraper relaxing, observing.
· POV Maximo - watches couples pass on the street below - he wants that.
· POV Maximo - looks at some messages on his phone.
· Message on phone says “excited to meet you tonight! I’ll have a red flower on my coat!”
· Maximo hears a cry for help and looks up.
· Maximo springs into action and flies away.
Act 2- SAVE THE DAY: EXTERIOR PARK
· Maximo arrives at the scene of an old woman getting robbed.
· The thief is running away as Maximo arrives.
· Silver Streak swoops in, stops the thief before Maximo can react.
· Silver Streak returns the stolen purse and gives Maximo a cocky grin.
· Cry for help.
· Silver Streak rolls his eyes at Maximo and flies away.
· Maximo is caught off guard by this challenger. He takes a moment to collect himself.
· Maximo flies away after Silver.
· Silver Streak arrives at an apartment building on fire - a child is inside.
· Silver he stops to take in the scene
· Maximo swoops past, saves the child from the fire.
· Maximo gives Silver Streak a smug look.
· Silver is visibly pissed off at being bested.
· Another cry for help.
· Both heroes look at each other again before taking off.
· Both heroes arrive at a part of the city where two trains are speeding towards each other.
· Heroes sneer at each other again and speed off to the two different trains, refusing to work together.
· Heroes land at the front of the respective trains.
· Heroes try to hold the trains back (think scene from Spider-Man).
· The trains slow as the characters come face to face.
· There is a moment where their eyes meet - a spark.
· They take in each other as the passengers cheer and the sun begins to set
· Hero’s watches go off with watch alarms flashing DATE! 30 mins
· Day is saved – heroes save the train together hurriedly to make their important date!
· Hero’s take off in different directions in the sky.
Act 3- DATE: EXTERIOR/INTERIOR RESTURANT
· Silver lands in a side alleyway, where he pulls out dressy clothes from behind a dumpster.
· Silver Streak walks to the front of the restaurant from the alley.
· Silver comes face to face with Maximo (also in plain clothes). They don’t recognize each other as their alter ego/super hero selves.
· Silver has a red flower in his breast pocket that is the signal that this is Maximo’s date (blind? Tinder?)
· They sit down for dinner in a booth.
· Maximo excuses himself to go to the restroom.
· While Silver Streak waits at the table, an alert plays on the screen about a new accident - a bomb threat with ticking timer that is shown on tv?
· In the bathroom, Maximo gets the alert on his phone.
· Heroes need to get out of the date situation ASAP but hesitate.
· Maximo leaves the restroom and peers around the corner looking at Silver.
· Silver is looking for Maximo.
· Maximo takes one last look at Silver at the table.
· Silver takes one last look around, pulls out money to leave for the bill.
· Maximo sneaks out the back door of the restaurant. He’s upset but knows he had to do this.
· Maximo begins to pull out his suit.
· Maximo hears something shuffle nearby.
· Maximo looks up - he’s face-to-face with Silver Streak, who came to the alley to change as well.
· At first, Maximo tries to hide his suit. Silver pulls his suit out from behind his back.
· They both realize each other’s identity.
· The two supers swoop in to the bomb threat scene.
· Maximo grabs the bomb, throws it to Silver in the air who kicks it into the sky, where it blows up.
· Maximo and Silver fly through the explosion and off into the night sky. They’re playfully messing with each other as they fly through the air
Act 1 (beats)
· Introduce Maximo alone
· Introduce Silver alone
· Illustrate they each have a date
Act 2 (beats)
· One big save the day moment that escalates, woman waiting for train, train goes awry and fire?
· Alarm = date time!
· Both heroes save the day
Act 3 (beats)
· Date at restaurant
· Alert!
· Reveal and save the day